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Students Rent a House and Discover an Open Safe in the Garage

Crime · Speculative fiction17 min readTwo chaptersChapter one free

Mira, Jae, Evie and Felix book a cheap weekend rental near the estuary. In the garage they discover an open safe and a ledger whose entries refer to dates that have not arrived yet. The contents raise questions about the house and the people who have used it.

When Felix disappears, the others hear signs that he may still be close by. A man wants the safe shut, while the students need to keep their route to Felix open. They must decide what to do with the records and how to reach their friend. This mystery introduces an impossible passage inside an otherwise ordinary rented house.

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A group of young people gathered around an open safe in a garage
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Chapter one

The Rented House

The students rented the house because none of them could afford the places in the photographs they liked. It stood at the northern edge of the city, where terraces gave way to scrubland and, beyond that, the estuary. The listing promised four bedrooms, a garden and parking. Its pictures had been taken in summer; in October, the roses were bare and the front step held a puddle the shape of a footprint. Mira carried her laptop inside first. Jae followed with recording equipment, Evie with three bags of groceries, and Felix with the conviction that he had organised the weekend when in fact he had only found the discount code.

They had come to finish a university project on the sounds of abandoned infrastructure. Jae wanted to record the old railway cutting; Mira was preparing maps for the exhibition; Evie wrote the accompanying text. Felix, who studied law and disliked being assigned the role of practical person, had promised to make sure they ate proper meals. He had driven them there in his mother's car. At half past four he discovered that the key box instructions mentioned a garage. The listing did not. The four of them followed a path behind the house, cut through a wall of ivy, and found a side door hanging open.

The garage smelled of wet leaves and machine oil. A bicycle frame leaned against the wall, its wheels missing. Against the back bricks stood an open safe taller than Jae's waist. Its door had been pulled wide and tied to a shelf with twine, as if somebody had wanted to make certain it could not shut. Six envelopes cut from heavy blue paper filled the top compartment. In the lower one lay a ledger bound in black cloth. Felix said they should phone the owner. Mira, already kneeling, read the address on the first envelope: a laundrette across town. The second named a pharmacy. The third said GYM, B17.

"Someone's treasure hunt," Evie said. She sounded hopeful. The remaining envelopes named the rented house, a cemetery and a council building with new ceilings. None held cash. The ledger was worse. Its columns were headed BEFORE CLOSURE and AFTER CLOSURE. Each line gave a name, a date and an address, with another name or a blank in the second column. Some dates lay twenty years in the future. Some were already past. Mira found her own name on a page dated next Tuesday. The second column said MISSING. She tried to laugh. Nobody joined her. Jae photographed every page without touching the book.

A phone rang in the house. Through the open back door, they heard Felix's mother's ringtone. Felix hurried away. Mira found a page dated eleven months earlier and stopped him. It listed SAIRA KHAN, a gym address, and a blank in the AFTER CLOSURE column. Beside the blank someone had written HOLD PENDING. "Is this where the gym locker is?" she asked. Felix turned to look, hand on the safe door. The twine was rotten and parted under his fingers. The door swung in by two inches. From the kitchen came the sound of a long hallway breathing open.

They ran inside. The wall beyond the kitchen table had become a corridor with floral wallpaper, lit by lamps that threw no shadow. It could not have fitted inside the house. Felix's phone was on the table, still ringing, although he had been carrying it a moment earlier. Mira called his name. Far down the corridor someone answered, but the voice arrived before the echo of her own shout. Jae went to the garage and pulled at the safe door. It resisted. The kitchen wall shivered; the corridor narrowed, and Felix's voice cut off. Jae let go, and the corridor returned.

"We keep the door open," Evie said. She fetched a spade from the garden and wedged its shaft across the safe's frame. The corridor steadied. Felix appeared at its far end, pale and furious. He took a step towards them. The lamps flickered, and he was suddenly farther away. Mira ran into the passage, counting doorways. At the third, she reached the kitchen from another angle. The room was empty. The same groceries sat on the table, but their receipts showed yesterday's date. Outside, the ivy had not yet grown over the garage. She backed through the corridor until she found the others, gripping the wallpaper to keep herself from following a doorway that had no reason to be there.

Felix had disappeared again. His phone stopped ringing. Evie called his mother and heard a woman say she had no son. It might have been a mistake, but the woman could recite the names of her two daughters and sounded offended by the suggestion of a third child. Evie hung up before she could do more harm. In the group photograph on her lock screen, Felix stood at the edge with one arm across Jae's shoulders. His face had blurred. Jae's camera, which stored raw files instead of syncing them, still showed him clearly. Mira copied the image to three drives. "Don't upload them yet," Jae said. "I want the originals somewhere he can't make vanish."

The owner answered Felix's earlier message with a standard line about checking out at ten. Mira called the number herself. A woman named Claire said there was no garage on the property and offered to send maintenance if the guests had found a dangerous shed. Mira looked through the kitchen window at the open side door. "Who lived here before it was a holiday let?" she asked. Claire said she had taken over the property after her father died. She had never been inside the garage. Her father kept it locked. Claire knew neither why there was a safe nor why its door had been tied open. She asked them not to touch anything until she arrived.

Jae set his recorder on the kitchen table. He had been capturing the sounds of the house since check-in: taps, floorboards, the laughter when they found the garage. The last thirty seconds contained steps on gravel, a car braking sharply and a woman calling Mira's name. Those sounds had not happened. Outside, a car rolled past without slowing. Jae rewound. Under the woman's voice was Felix saying, "Don't let him take the book." Mira looked at the ledger in her hands. She could not tell whether the recording was a warning or a trace of something already lost.

Evie read the dates in the ledger aloud while Mira compared them with local newspaper archives on her phone. A line from 1998 named a child who had died in a warehouse fire; the corresponding AFTER CLOSURE entry left her alive but displaced a night porter. A later line showed the porter recorded as missing. Another named an elderly man who had not died at all, yet his family had been issued a death certificate. The book was not a prediction engine. It was an accounting of choices made at crossings like the one in the kitchen. Its author had turned people into balances, as if a missing person could make an arithmetic problem come out clean.

The kitchen corridor flickered. Felix reappeared, close enough for Mira to see the scrape on his knuckles. He carried a paper label torn from one of the blue envelopes. "There's another safe," he said. "Same room, different year. He's coming through it." Behind him a door opened and a man in grey uniform stepped into view. There was no hurry in the man's walk. On his wrist was a black tattoo shaped like a door without a handle. Felix tried to run. The lights in the corridor went out in sequence between him and the kitchen, leaving only his voice: "Copy the ledger. Every page."

The man reached the doorway before Felix. He looked at the spade bracing the safe and then at Mira's phone. "You were told not to enter the service area," he said. Mira replied that no one had told them anything. "The warning is on the booking documents." Evie held up the confirmation; it mentioned parking but no service area. The man seemed annoyed, not surprised. "Then the document is late," he said. He reached for the ledger, and Jae stepped between them with the recorder in his hand. The recording played the future car braking. The man froze. For one frightened second he looked less like an official than a person who had heard his own name spoken at a funeral.

Mira got out through the back door with the ledger. Evie followed, filming. The man did not chase them. He moved to the safe and examined the wedge. "The boy is not in there," he called. "That is an account of him. If you close the safe, you may still remember him for a while. If you leave it open, the rest of the house will continue to split." Jae heard the distinction. The man had not said Felix was safe. He had merely described how long their memories might last. Jae put his foot against the safe door and said, "Then it stays open."

The safe gave a single knock from within its steel walls. Jae felt the impact through his shoe. A second knock followed, then three quick taps, the rhythm Felix always used on his bedroom door before entering. Jae looked at Mira across the garden. She could hear it too. The man in grey saw them exchange a glance and reached into his pocket for a narrow brass tool. Evie moved the spade's handle out of his reach, careful not to disturb its wedge. For all the strange things in the house, the argument had become simple: Felix was somewhere they could hear him, and this stranger wanted a door shut. Mira held the ledger behind her back. She did not yet know how to bring her friend home. She knew she could stop someone else making that impossible. From the kitchen corridor, Felix called once more, his voice suddenly close: "Mira, whatever he tells you, the dates can change."